tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post2187559319974674396..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Get Out of Here! ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 05/10/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-29927096288050468372015-05-13T22:27:25.425-04:002015-05-13T22:27:25.425-04:00Her behavior felt very real, Chelle. This must be ...Her behavior felt very real, Chelle. This must be terrifying for her--to have her son's father walk back into their lives. Nicely done! :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-49890386887442236462015-05-12T23:44:47.450-04:002015-05-12T23:44:47.450-04:00Wow, talk about a heart-wrenching surprise. Emotio...Wow, talk about a heart-wrenching surprise. Emotional scene.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-71688594006960608352015-05-12T18:46:12.459-04:002015-05-12T18:46:12.459-04:00OOPS!!
LINDA BOOPS!!<br /><br /><br />LINDA BAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-63301540779806677592015-05-12T18:45:24.501-04:002015-05-12T18:45:24.501-04:00mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Chelle!!
POKING HEAD UP, ...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Chelle!!<br /><br />POKING HEAD UP, JUST BACK FROM JAMICA AND WASING THROUGH MESSAGESAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-36344647727178435642015-05-12T12:23:59.728-04:002015-05-12T12:23:59.728-04:00Great scene. But, yeah, I think he should have tho...Great scene. But, yeah, I think he should have thought things out a bit more before barging into her life. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-57226360838162246362015-05-11T22:18:39.078-04:002015-05-11T22:18:39.078-04:00Very vivid! Rough stuff and easy to follow. The pa...Very vivid! Rough stuff and easy to follow. The pace works too.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-83117519718788046612015-05-10T22:29:10.824-04:002015-05-10T22:29:10.824-04:00Great tension in this scene! I'm not sure she&...Great tension in this scene! I'm not sure she's ready to calm down yet. :) Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-89377967723787451582015-05-10T21:53:45.247-04:002015-05-10T21:53:45.247-04:00He better have a good explanation if he wants to c...He better have a good explanation if he wants to convince her. Good snippet, Chelle. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-62817647827533289622015-05-10T19:47:00.048-04:002015-05-10T19:47:00.048-04:00Love it. I hope she'll calm down for them to h...Love it. I hope she'll calm down for them to have a talk.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1377641141536890262015-05-10T18:34:27.142-04:002015-05-10T18:34:27.142-04:00I love this plot. So interesting.I love this plot. So interesting.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-5937075625048472802015-05-10T18:15:35.426-04:002015-05-10T18:15:35.426-04:00Intriguing situation going on here.Intriguing situation going on here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-41125060632726398302015-05-10T15:37:02.442-04:002015-05-10T15:37:02.442-04:00I think Justin has good sense. I hope Layne can ca...I think Justin has good sense. I hope Layne can calm down - I get why she's so upset but she'll never be able to cope with this if she doesn't get a handle on her emotions. Very effective excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-79847177420288227152015-05-10T15:13:56.265-04:002015-05-10T15:13:56.265-04:00A prank causes this to happen? Some joke. Exciting...A prank causes this to happen? Some joke. Exciting, Chelle with conflict right from the beginning.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-15219307432882706122015-05-10T15:11:40.039-04:002015-05-10T15:11:40.039-04:00I'm not sure it's fair to call her crazy--...I'm not sure it's fair to call her crazy--he did just spring it on her, what did he think would happen? A hug?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-78782334706293070952015-05-10T14:14:06.543-04:002015-05-10T14:14:06.543-04:00What did he think was going to happen?
Perfect ex...What did he think was going to happen?<br /><br />Perfect excerpt for Mother's Day, Chelle! :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-63349913922274595102015-05-10T09:04:26.471-04:002015-05-10T09:04:26.471-04:00Ooh, what is going on with Layne? Love the tensio...Ooh, what is going on with Layne? Love the tension and I hope she calms down enough to tell him what's going on. Great eight! Happy Mother's Day Chelle!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-2548581132039341832015-05-10T06:22:43.991-04:002015-05-10T06:22:43.991-04:00Great premise and potential for conflict is right ...Great premise and potential for conflict is right there! Looking good.Zoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17840907736356378810noreply@blogger.com