tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post2596961236343760075..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Betrayal - Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 02/01/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-83934877732769863962015-02-03T20:51:20.588-05:002015-02-03T20:51:20.588-05:00Oh that Billy!!! Everything happens for a reason ...Oh that Billy!!! Everything happens for a reason though and it sounds like their time has come! :) Forget Billy, what's next???? Great eight!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-18064555998329438672015-02-02T09:05:32.303-05:002015-02-02T09:05:32.303-05:00Hum, I think Billy was just taking his chance and ...Hum, I think Billy was just taking his chance and managed to win at the game. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-13686199119323236962015-02-01T20:36:30.440-05:002015-02-01T20:36:30.440-05:00Thanks for all of your comments - yes Billy had ul...Thanks for all of your comments - yes Billy had ulterior motives and he was totally deceptive to people who trusted him. In the first snippet of this story Janis had just buried Billy (he was killed in the line of duty) but even though he may not be there anymore, the damage he did will have repercussions. But I have already gone beyond the 40% that I am allowed to share...<br />(btw, I am thrilled that everyone is seeing Billy for the *** that he really was)Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-35619643323589993632015-02-01T18:09:14.597-05:002015-02-01T18:09:14.597-05:00Oh, boo. Billy needs a comeuppance for that!Oh, boo. Billy needs a comeuppance for that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-37165557152681665572015-02-01T16:13:35.919-05:002015-02-01T16:13:35.919-05:00Ugh. Billy sounds like one of those smooth talkers...Ugh. Billy sounds like one of those smooth talkers who doesn't care who he hurts. It's sad what they can do to trusting people.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-59764489276565693392015-02-01T16:07:06.173-05:002015-02-01T16:07:06.173-05:00Billy isn't the friend he seems to be. Nice re...Billy isn't the friend he seems to be. Nice revelation.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-46039139604763308952015-02-01T15:27:03.257-05:002015-02-01T15:27:03.257-05:00Billy sure messed things up for them. But it sound...Billy sure messed things up for them. But it sounds like they're on track.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22162486266765968492015-02-01T15:21:26.093-05:002015-02-01T15:21:26.093-05:00Oh my, that is hard to get over. All that time was...Oh my, that is hard to get over. All that time wasted...Another intense snippet. Great 8.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-16411141786866024762015-02-01T14:32:23.505-05:002015-02-01T14:32:23.505-05:00This is why you always ask the source. Great snipp...This is why you always ask the source. Great snippet, Chelle. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1751417343886092472015-02-01T12:32:04.365-05:002015-02-01T12:32:04.365-05:00Very interesting insight you gave us today, into w...Very interesting insight you gave us today, into why the events have happened the way they did. Excellent excerpt1Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-88155552301171357542015-02-01T12:24:13.564-05:002015-02-01T12:24:13.564-05:00They've shared what has kept them apart. His n...They've shared what has kept them apart. His name is Billy. This reads like daytime drama, "Will the couple get together now that the secrets are revealed? And will Billy continue to keep them apart? Tune in next week." Except this story is also like real life and that's why it's so good.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-87794897869905961602015-02-01T11:53:47.564-05:002015-02-01T11:53:47.564-05:00Billy has wasted so much time for themBilly has wasted so much time for themAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13164269285285491186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-40887393299296661722015-02-01T11:37:00.719-05:002015-02-01T11:37:00.719-05:00Oh, I can see more obstacles coming. It seems Bill...Oh, I can see more obstacles coming. It seems Billy is messing with them! Great snippet!Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-61738538164716812802015-02-01T11:35:34.502-05:002015-02-01T11:35:34.502-05:00It's the obstacles that make for a great story...It's the obstacles that make for a great story. Nice snippet!JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-55997544516955203142015-02-01T09:22:32.430-05:002015-02-01T09:22:32.430-05:00Oh, those "no fault" missed opportunitie...Oh, those "no fault" missed opportunities!<br /><br />I hope they manage all those obstacles . . . I like this story, Chelle. :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-38965983091048256502015-02-01T08:26:19.251-05:002015-02-01T08:26:19.251-05:00I somehow left the same comment twice, Chelle, so ...I somehow left the same comment twice, Chelle, so I deleted one. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-3122141027706197402015-02-01T08:24:25.675-05:002015-02-01T08:24:25.675-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-44277439334049506822015-02-01T08:24:11.463-05:002015-02-01T08:24:11.463-05:00As the saying goes, who needs enemies when you hav...As the saying goes, who needs enemies when you have friends like that? What a scoundrel.<br /><br />Good 8! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-6379494324924781452015-02-01T07:15:52.481-05:002015-02-01T07:15:52.481-05:00Even if all is fair in love and war, I don't l...Even if all is fair in love and war, I don't like Billy's manipulations. I doubt if his "friends" will either. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-17292471888417485662015-02-01T01:27:33.463-05:002015-02-01T01:27:33.463-05:00Sounds like Billy wanted her all to himself -- but...Sounds like Billy wanted her all to himself -- but did want her or just not want Jerry to have her?P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-42277222938110964182015-02-01T00:10:46.652-05:002015-02-01T00:10:46.652-05:00I hope everything works our for them in the end. I hope everything works our for them in the end. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.com