tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post3080427399121936628..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Part of a short story collection - Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 10/26/14Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-48395247280057104252014-10-27T10:59:38.277-04:002014-10-27T10:59:38.277-04:00Oh, this makes me want to know what happened? Car ...Oh, this makes me want to know what happened? Car accident? Jordan was driving? Something big went down. Great 8.Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-41517276088310900212014-10-27T09:04:12.682-04:002014-10-27T09:04:12.682-04:00Love it. Don't we all wish that sometimes we ...Love it. Don't we all wish that sometimes we woke up and the previous day had all been a bad dream!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-86483859149976391862014-10-27T00:23:16.351-04:002014-10-27T00:23:16.351-04:00Makes me wonder what Jordan did--people don't ...Makes me wonder what Jordan did--people don't always blame you for *good* reasons, but they usually have *some* reason.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22275070319372884152014-10-26T20:12:49.556-04:002014-10-26T20:12:49.556-04:00Intense and intriguing and raises so many question...Intense and intriguing and raises so many questions. I'm very much hooked so excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-18680136772550083792014-10-26T19:54:41.509-04:002014-10-26T19:54:41.509-04:00More will be revealed next week. Jordan was physic...More will be revealed next week. Jordan was physically hurt but the events leading to it are what others thought might make him suicidal.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-78178858165236083752014-10-26T19:00:23.959-04:002014-10-26T19:00:23.959-04:00So is Jordan physically injured or are they just w...So is Jordan physically injured or are they just watching him because he's so upset he's suicidal?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-24241068027068125912014-10-26T13:25:45.011-04:002014-10-26T13:25:45.011-04:00I'm moved by this eight without knowing the wh...I'm moved by this eight without knowing the why and wherefore. I look forward to next week to get a peek at what's going on with Jordan.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90712781060113468462014-10-26T11:53:49.275-04:002014-10-26T11:53:49.275-04:00Filled with painful emotions and mystery you leave...Filled with painful emotions and mystery you leave the reader wanting more. I'm with Millie and Linda and hope you answer some of our questions;).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-26627599655411539912014-10-26T09:00:54.473-04:002014-10-26T09:00:54.473-04:00I like it! You did a great job of feeding the read...I like it! You did a great job of feeding the reader a lot of the details without pulling back and making it feel like an infodump. Seamlessly incorporated. Nicely done, Chelle :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-31413612443749906272014-10-26T05:06:34.264-04:002014-10-26T05:06:34.264-04:00Great snippet, really draws you in.Great snippet, really draws you in.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-52131313788457030102014-10-26T02:48:30.426-04:002014-10-26T02:48:30.426-04:00I'm with Linda, this snippet left me with ques...I'm with Linda, this snippet left me with questions unanswered...so hope you give us more next week.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-46969664903927090572014-10-26T01:27:58.480-04:002014-10-26T01:27:58.480-04:00I'm curious for what happened. Jordan was hurt...I'm curious for what happened. Jordan was hurt too, I don't really get why everyone is blaming him but not letting him go to the cemetery seems a bit harsh. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.com