tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post3502496379694610956..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: About their son ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 05/03/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-3017710931631080192015-05-04T23:32:52.764-04:002015-05-04T23:32:52.764-04:00What a premise! I'm very curious to read how t...What a premise! I'm very curious to read how that conversation goes.Aheilahttp://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-71200596916802517352015-05-04T09:27:52.718-04:002015-05-04T09:27:52.718-04:00What a way to end the snippet. I want to know what...What a way to end the snippet. I want to know what he has to say.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-32960918073174258972015-05-04T09:00:59.756-04:002015-05-04T09:00:59.756-04:00Yes, there is something he wants to talk about. V...Yes, there is something he wants to talk about. Very hot. The end was a shocker! Great eight!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-12857734293298553492015-05-03T23:45:24.798-04:002015-05-03T23:45:24.798-04:00Yeah, I can see how that would be a shock... Inter...Yeah, I can see how that would be a shock... Interesting premise.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22621905092770671112015-05-03T20:41:42.711-04:002015-05-03T20:41:42.711-04:00Yikes! Should he really be checking her out before...Yikes! Should he really be checking her out before sharing a secret like that?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-4686049147469638702015-05-03T18:18:41.092-04:002015-05-03T18:18:41.092-04:00Talk about shocking news. Wow!!!Talk about shocking news. Wow!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-72202804599161541342015-05-03T17:04:01.352-04:002015-05-03T17:04:01.352-04:00That grabbed her attention. Super beginning.That grabbed her attention. Super beginning.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1135175771352687282015-05-03T16:04:29.608-04:002015-05-03T16:04:29.608-04:00Okay, this sure took the story in a new direction....Okay, this sure took the story in a new direction. The only explanation that comes to mind is roofies, but if Layne is a good guy, that isn't likely. Intriguing twist!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-34883625892448603902015-05-03T15:03:20.858-04:002015-05-03T15:03:20.858-04:00Oooh, that second-to-last sentence! I'd be in ...Oooh, that second-to-last sentence! I'd be in shock, too! Intriguing, Chelle!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-24800247978197024792015-05-03T14:27:18.843-04:002015-05-03T14:27:18.843-04:00That'll definitely get her attention. Good sni...That'll definitely get her attention. Good snippet, Chelle.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-60326631929804891542015-05-03T14:14:41.411-04:002015-05-03T14:14:41.411-04:00Wow, you've got the most fascinating story pre...Wow, you've got the most fascinating story premise here. I liked the way the excerpt built up the tension. Terrific!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-87280192497748613062015-05-03T12:22:09.449-04:002015-05-03T12:22:09.449-04:00What?! Bombshell right?! Great snippet can't w...What?! Bombshell right?! Great snippet can't wait for more. Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-50582415943937017882015-05-03T10:43:09.621-04:002015-05-03T10:43:09.621-04:00This is a terrific premise, Chelle!
I'm assum...This is a terrific premise, Chelle!<br /><br />I'm assuming that the ex-husband is the one who forced the insemination? What a peach . . . Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-2292559765659316612015-05-03T08:41:27.271-04:002015-05-03T08:41:27.271-04:00What! Their son? But how can that be? What! Their son? But how can that be? Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-80421112517370150072015-05-03T08:21:37.976-04:002015-05-03T08:21:37.976-04:00Things are about to get complicated. Nice nine Che...Things are about to get complicated. Nice nine Chelle.Kim Magennisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-43524509111407543432015-05-03T07:25:15.895-04:002015-05-03T07:25:15.895-04:00A shack to the system and told so well. Explanatio...A shack to the system and told so well. Explanation coming soon, I hope.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-80639425972209878452015-05-03T01:06:02.915-04:002015-05-03T01:06:02.915-04:00Well, now, that's definitely not what she was ...Well, now, that's definitely not what she was expecting! Nice detail in the description, too. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-52684931815058930072015-05-03T00:41:00.974-04:002015-05-03T00:41:00.974-04:00Son ??
This is getting better and better!Son ??<br /><br />This is getting better and better!Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.com