tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post4184072230971395132..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Disappearing act ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 08/28/16Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-54893474976217296252016-09-03T14:03:31.086-04:002016-09-03T14:03:31.086-04:00I wonder what scared her so much that she had to g...I wonder what scared her so much that she had to go so fast. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-15091628080490668322016-08-31T07:03:49.995-04:002016-08-31T07:03:49.995-04:00Oh, poor Dave. I hope they meet again soon. And I ...Oh, poor Dave. I hope they meet again soon. And I wonder, why she has to go so urgently. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-40544015606111341672016-08-30T04:24:01.609-04:002016-08-30T04:24:01.609-04:00oh ... nice last line. great snippet.oh ... nice last line. great snippet.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-8490169020993673172016-08-30T00:53:46.217-04:002016-08-30T00:53:46.217-04:00Classic last lines! I wonder what made her so scar...Classic last lines! I wonder what made her so scared so suddenly. Her husband? Him wanting to know her better? I hope she sees him again and lets him help her. Really enjoying this story.Daelyn Morganahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08385654289216320548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-37297860645808613802016-08-29T00:49:25.460-04:002016-08-29T00:49:25.460-04:00Just when the conversation was getting interesting...Just when the conversation was getting interesting... She's going to have to trust him--I think she'll need some help to get away from her situation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-73914527179263334982016-08-29T00:26:39.572-04:002016-08-29T00:26:39.572-04:00Her husband, I bet/fear?Her husband, I bet/fear?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-87924798089895714142016-08-28T23:00:40.386-04:002016-08-28T23:00:40.386-04:00Just when things were peaking! Good hook! Can'...Just when things were peaking! Good hook! Can't wait to see what happens next!Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1812653452510074332016-08-28T22:12:34.752-04:002016-08-28T22:12:34.752-04:00I'm afraid to know what interrupted their conn...I'm afraid to know what interrupted their connection or who...Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-59336970462412463442016-08-28T20:37:16.244-04:002016-08-28T20:37:16.244-04:00Oh, getting even cuter! I hope they will be able t...Oh, getting even cuter! I hope they will be able to see each other again.Rin-Rinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01768581512939794246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-70742861259741512792016-08-28T20:37:06.240-04:002016-08-28T20:37:06.240-04:00I wonder why she left so suddenly? Is she in troub...I wonder why she left so suddenly? Is she in trouble?Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-65792701055065855132016-08-28T12:38:04.396-04:002016-08-28T12:38:04.396-04:00I wonder what scared her while she was asleep and ...I wonder what scared her while she was asleep and dreaming?P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-85218702713453576412016-08-28T12:32:15.553-04:002016-08-28T12:32:15.553-04:00Not good that she has to leave so suddenly. I hope...Not good that she has to leave so suddenly. I hope she's okay. Great snippet! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-49162984975617875652016-08-28T12:22:08.886-04:002016-08-28T12:22:08.886-04:00Aww, I hope she finds her way back to him. He seem...Aww, I hope she finds her way back to him. He seems so sincere!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-60787492096880196462016-08-28T11:51:04.186-04:002016-08-28T11:51:04.186-04:00What an ending to a beautiful moment. . .or is it?...What an ending to a beautiful moment. . .or is it? See you next week.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-56838079401663923362016-08-28T11:48:03.872-04:002016-08-28T11:48:03.872-04:00Poor guy. Did she have to go just when things were...Poor guy. Did she have to go just when things were getting interesting???Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-57001531572378911462016-08-28T11:04:37.374-04:002016-08-28T11:04:37.374-04:00I love Dave and Annie and I agree with the others ...I love Dave and Annie and I agree with the others - you're building the tension and the connection between them SO nicely! Great snippet. Happy there's going to be a sequel!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-65795296432669739152016-08-28T10:51:15.859-04:002016-08-28T10:51:15.859-04:00Ack--what made her leave like that! Hurry up next ...Ack--what made her leave like that! Hurry up next Sunday!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-64713092320553791532016-08-28T10:47:36.059-04:002016-08-28T10:47:36.059-04:00I hope she didn't have to leave for a bad reas...I hope she didn't have to leave for a bad reason This is going to drive him crazy!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-78921425506514875282016-08-28T09:25:55.909-04:002016-08-28T09:25:55.909-04:00I see they're going to have a frustrating time...I see they're going to have a frustrating time!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-19336034648099499922016-08-28T08:46:39.283-04:002016-08-28T08:46:39.283-04:00Great snippet, Chelle. Teases the curiosity - both...Great snippet, Chelle. Teases the curiosity - both his and ours.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-55016326293556618012016-08-28T05:16:16.128-04:002016-08-28T05:16:16.128-04:00Excellent hook, Chelle.
I don't like the soun...Excellent hook, Chelle.<br /><br />I don't like the sound of her having to go like that.<br /><br />Having said that, the chemistry between Annie and Dave is building nicely. Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.com