tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post4474728439027171795..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: The First Meeting ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 12/13/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-18243042385476007552015-12-20T06:54:38.877-05:002015-12-20T06:54:38.877-05:00Well, "Obviously". Pfft. lol. I might ki...Well, "Obviously". Pfft. lol. I might kick sand at him. Good job describing the action, Chelle. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-36718568682991518852015-12-20T00:43:08.940-05:002015-12-20T00:43:08.940-05:00A bronze god... what a great descriptor. Coupled w...A bronze god... what a great descriptor. Coupled with the storm brewing in over the ocean, the scene takes on a mythic quality. Nice.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-59069985829977886182015-12-18T22:03:03.181-05:002015-12-18T22:03:03.181-05:00Oh wow, what a reply! ... and yeah, happened to me...Oh wow, what a reply! ... and yeah, happened to me as well once or twice, yet no bronze god anywhere near me :-)Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-14046187235023630072015-12-18T16:30:34.594-05:002015-12-18T16:30:34.594-05:00I love that last line. Such a tourist. :-P Thank...I love that last line. Such a tourist. :-P Thanks so much for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02844673914216514226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-91334635255462505202015-12-18T13:04:22.735-05:002015-12-18T13:04:22.735-05:00Ha! I love that last line!Ha! I love that last line!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-58104434923913875392015-12-15T12:47:59.949-05:002015-12-15T12:47:59.949-05:00I like a little antagonism between main characters...I like a little antagonism between main characters. Makes for lots of sparks! :-) Nice snippet.<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-24308898554072072622015-12-13T23:49:52.359-05:002015-12-13T23:49:52.359-05:00You've told us so much about this character an...You've told us so much about this character and the setting ... without 'telling' us anything. Very enjoyable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-91884453164373556182015-12-13T22:41:11.956-05:002015-12-13T22:41:11.956-05:00Waves do have a way of surprising you, if you don&...Waves do have a way of surprising you, if you don't know their tricky ways. I've never been gotten quite that well, but I have been surprised, too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-39538295616163047302015-12-13T20:26:56.164-05:002015-12-13T20:26:56.164-05:00I can picture the scene. Nice writing.I can picture the scene. Nice writing.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-74518795497234863522015-12-13T19:11:42.246-05:002015-12-13T19:11:42.246-05:00 Bronze god, but his manners have knocked him off ... Bronze god, but his manners have knocked him off the pedestal. lol Great imagery with the wave and sputtering... :) Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90016558889635659932015-12-13T14:43:25.946-05:002015-12-13T14:43:25.946-05:00The excerpt was excellent and reading your real li...The excerpt was excellent and reading your real life 'back story' was fascinating. Always cool to know some of the inspiration for a scene or story!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-82995039302704459672015-12-13T14:18:13.149-05:002015-12-13T14:18:13.149-05:00I wonder if he meant the comment playfully. Maybe ...I wonder if he meant the comment playfully. Maybe the bronze God will redeem himself? Ah, the beach.... sigh. Great snippet!Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18021898381530493048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-47777878503782242912015-12-13T12:55:49.415-05:002015-12-13T12:55:49.415-05:00I agree with PT. He couldn't sound more dismis...I agree with PT. He couldn't sound more dismissive if he tried. Good snippet, Chelle. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-29922726674895108422015-12-13T12:46:31.422-05:002015-12-13T12:46:31.422-05:00I've been wiped out by waves at Nags Head, so ...I've been wiped out by waves at Nags Head, so I do feel her pain. But the bronze "god" was rather rude! A bit more sympathy would have been nice. :) Great snippet!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-27926908172238106572015-12-13T11:35:48.942-05:002015-12-13T11:35:48.942-05:00Love it, love the beach and the way you tell the s...Love it, love the beach and the way you tell the story. Thanks, Chelle.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-14477635624706412172015-12-13T02:10:24.452-05:002015-12-13T02:10:24.452-05:00“Obviously a tourist.”
Somehow, that doesn't ...“Obviously a tourist.”<br /><br />Somehow, that doesn't sound like an auspicious start to a relationship... Or even a fling.PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-38437677071501682172015-12-13T02:03:41.265-05:002015-12-13T02:03:41.265-05:00Wow, that's some wave. I guess I would have be...Wow, that's some wave. I guess I would have been surprised too. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-70665985015684714572015-12-13T01:18:03.354-05:002015-12-13T01:18:03.354-05:00Though I don't live in a beach or lakefront to...Though I don't live in a beach or lakefront town, I'd assume someone were a tourist too if just one little wave knocked her clear off her feet. Seems to me Debbie doesn't have much experience in the water.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-29444567358783630922015-12-13T00:04:34.205-05:002015-12-13T00:04:34.205-05:00You got this just right Chelle. You told us she wa...You got this just right Chelle. You told us she was inexperienced with the sea, and was about to get into deep water (figuratively too!) all at once. I wager she gets into more trouble before she leaves...Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.com