tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post5559316788856345368..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Welcome to A Chaunce of Riches - Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 10/19/14Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-65955293008904096112014-10-19T23:57:15.711-04:002014-10-19T23:57:15.711-04:00Ohhhhhh! Her son?! I am intrigued.Ohhhhhh! Her son?! I am intrigued.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90626335473034652572014-10-19T22:28:20.471-04:002014-10-19T22:28:20.471-04:00Oh my, Veronica, thank you for pointing out that I...Oh my, Veronica, thank you for pointing out that I previously did some snippets from A Chaunce of Riches, somehow I missed that. I will review all of my snippets to make sure that doesn't happen again - and I will post links to ACOR snippets for anyone who wants to follow them.<br />Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-76324401134842209152014-10-19T22:16:04.646-04:002014-10-19T22:16:04.646-04:00Great tension and a complex situation all captured...Great tension and a complex situation all captured with crisp writing. Wonderful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08242815035131152082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-65439312609539060442014-10-19T20:58:43.718-04:002014-10-19T20:58:43.718-04:00wow...love the tension there. Ben having to face t...wow...love the tension there. Ben having to face the woman that broke his heart and Sam having to hear that even after years have passed what she did still affected him. Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-463802767221100742014-10-19T15:50:47.077-04:002014-10-19T15:50:47.077-04:00I think I remember this story? From excerpts you g...I think I remember this story? From excerpts you gave us a long time ago? I thought it was terrific then and I like the twist today, that it's her son she wants protected. Excellent snippet! Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-2717631770854313952014-10-19T12:09:33.530-04:002014-10-19T12:09:33.530-04:00Great tension and a really interesting premise:)Great tension and a really interesting premise:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-35126953486913543622014-10-19T10:49:24.948-04:002014-10-19T10:49:24.948-04:00Tense situation here and the cliff hanger about th...Tense situation here and the cliff hanger about the son. Her son. My mind buzzes with possibilities. Terrific snippet.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-82767644207963257232014-10-19T10:18:03.505-04:002014-10-19T10:18:03.505-04:00Good that she reminds him of his mission. Nice des...Good that she reminds him of his mission. Nice descriptions, too, leading up to that last sentence.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-19485639062894815432014-10-19T02:23:03.542-04:002014-10-19T02:23:03.542-04:00Interesting. I really like how she puts him in hi...Interesting. I really like how she puts him in his place at the end, reminds him that he's there to protect the son. Great snippet. I love this story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-51553368370982244332014-10-18T23:36:55.904-04:002014-10-18T23:36:55.904-04:00This is always an awkward situation. But it's ...This is always an awkward situation. But it's made even more awkward with the threats.<br /><br />http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/Catch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.com