tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post6697052098265235619..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Opening Lines from Hyphema ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 09/18/16Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-15894432502958645292016-11-27T07:12:48.635-05:002016-11-27T07:12:48.635-05:00Excellent storyline, Chelle. Am very intrigued by ...Excellent storyline, Chelle. Am very intrigued by your title!Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-50876138727430236462016-09-19T00:46:27.450-04:002016-09-19T00:46:27.450-04:00Nice backstory and exposition!Nice backstory and exposition!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-66787412896954078142016-09-18T21:30:02.224-04:002016-09-18T21:30:02.224-04:00I, too, wondered if the choppy flight was indicati...I, too, wondered if the choppy flight was indicative of the reception he and his family (esp. his wife) would get. Great beginning.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-15495044133873625402016-09-18T18:55:28.868-04:002016-09-18T18:55:28.868-04:00Something this way comes... Good setup!Something this way comes... Good setup!Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-43837298743072433652016-09-18T16:35:15.352-04:002016-09-18T16:35:15.352-04:00Very interesting setup, with many possible sources...Very interesting setup, with many possible sources of conflict.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-42027205469443266692016-09-18T13:43:49.678-04:002016-09-18T13:43:49.678-04:00This sounds like a really interesting story concep...This sounds like a really interesting story concept, and this is a great beginning!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-51373199032809157152016-09-18T12:57:23.457-04:002016-09-18T12:57:23.457-04:00I'm curious to read more. Great snippet.I'm curious to read more. Great snippet. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-33702804431417822782016-09-18T12:47:58.277-04:002016-09-18T12:47:58.277-04:00Interesting set up and I'd definitely keep rea...Interesting set up and I'd definitely keep reading this one - great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-72690124603747808592016-09-18T12:37:14.914-04:002016-09-18T12:37:14.914-04:00Wonder if the choppy weather is symbolic of what i...Wonder if the choppy weather is symbolic of what is to come...Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-35600328024732028482016-09-18T11:50:04.656-04:002016-09-18T11:50:04.656-04:00Beautiful beginning. What a story. Thank you.Beautiful beginning. What a story. Thank you.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com