tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post6951195159876971071..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Adam is ready to talk - Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / June 22, 2014Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-6192341294892483222014-06-29T00:10:02.990-04:002014-06-29T00:10:02.990-04:00Oh, what a cliffhanger, Chelle! I hope you pick up...Oh, what a cliffhanger, Chelle! I hope you pick up here this week. :-) This snippet is very well written. Quite visual. Nicely done. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-87925241435342426632014-06-22T23:55:17.446-04:002014-06-22T23:55:17.446-04:00If my name was Davida, I'd go by Davie, too.
...If my name was Davida, I'd go by Davie, too. <br /><br />I like how he looks around the room for the courage to say what comes next. Good on him for saying it, even if he's scared of what will happen. Sometimes honesty doesn't pay off, but lies make things so much worse!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-8302102093640143472014-06-22T22:32:24.099-04:002014-06-22T22:32:24.099-04:00That does take courage. I hope she understands an...That does take courage. I hope she understands and forgives whatever it was he did. Compelling 8!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-41021351284132518872014-06-22T18:40:00.421-04:002014-06-22T18:40:00.421-04:00Hmm, what's he been hiding?Hmm, what's he been hiding?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-76860991242217348332014-06-22T17:02:38.019-04:002014-06-22T17:02:38.019-04:00Has me wondering what he's been hiding.Has me wondering what he's been hiding.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-70862705800844343082014-06-22T16:18:31.266-04:002014-06-22T16:18:31.266-04:00I wonder what's in his past and if she'll ...I wonder what's in his past and if she'll be able to handle it. Intriguing snippet.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22652202162427465442014-06-22T15:54:21.914-04:002014-06-22T15:54:21.914-04:00And the conflict begins... will she stay or will s...And the conflict begins... will she stay or will she go! Great snippet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14583205410758708248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-44771922104401758432014-06-22T14:51:26.894-04:002014-06-22T14:51:26.894-04:00Hi all,
The name Davie is short for Davida; I...Hi all,<br /> The name Davie is short for Davida; I heard that name as a child and fell in love with it.<br /> HEA, so she does accept and stay with him, but his past comes back to create more than a little havoc and they have much greater obstacles to overcome.<br /> Thank you so much for your comments, I have seen things in my writing & story that I was never aware of - that's why I stayed with this story so long in WeWriWa.<br />Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-7992848135933631722014-06-22T14:19:16.336-04:002014-06-22T14:19:16.336-04:00Some serious emotions here. It makes me sad this i...Some serious emotions here. It makes me sad this is the last snippet, because I want to know what he has to say next :) Great 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481361022996075084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-75186575750787565952014-06-22T14:01:09.198-04:002014-06-22T14:01:09.198-04:00Courageous beautifully written scene, Chelle.Get i...Courageous beautifully written scene, Chelle.Get it out in the open and let the chips fall where they lie, I always say.Don't listen to me.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-57543568734510859862014-06-22T11:49:19.325-04:002014-06-22T11:49:19.325-04:00I'm glad he's going to be brave enough to ...I'm glad he's going to be brave enough to tell her whatever it is right up front. Hopefully she can handle the revelation! Interesting snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-64395515914161723172014-06-22T11:35:45.687-04:002014-06-22T11:35:45.687-04:00Best to get those "some things" out in t...Best to get those "some things" out in the open. It takes courage, the risk of losing everything, but better now than having secrets come out later.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-31325254407337615522014-06-22T10:33:11.494-04:002014-06-22T10:33:11.494-04:00Lovely scene. I'm wondering what Adam has to r...Lovely scene. I'm wondering what Adam has to reveal...but I hope Davie is able to accept it. Great 8Sarah Casshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03299866797067130767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1404407659931681132014-06-22T10:02:09.942-04:002014-06-22T10:02:09.942-04:00Yeah, cool name! (My wife's nickname is "...Yeah, cool name! (My wife's nickname is "Bob," so I can identify!)<br />If it's real love, I doubt much he can tell her will dissuade her.<br /><br />"The heart has reasons that reason knows nothing of." -- PascalFCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-52975289405052889062014-06-22T02:55:48.942-04:002014-06-22T02:55:48.942-04:00I haven't been participating in WeWriWa for aw...I haven't been participating in WeWriWa for awhile, so don't know the story, but it sounds interesting. Hopefully, Davie can overcome whatever Adam did in the past. That's a great name for a female character. Unique!Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.com