tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post8295122164716595316..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: He loves her, he loves her not... ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 01/25/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-91107686203203524492015-01-30T22:00:01.011-05:002015-01-30T22:00:01.011-05:00He gets double points for noticing she's upset...He gets double points for noticing she's upset and coming to find out why. Very interesting snippet. I want more.Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-72716590851643470042015-01-26T07:05:59.151-05:002015-01-26T07:05:59.151-05:00Interesting dialogue. Can't wait to read more ...Interesting dialogue. Can't wait to read more next week.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-79064078214931421582015-01-25T21:56:30.347-05:002015-01-25T21:56:30.347-05:00Wow, he's keen to see her. Now I"m curiou...Wow, he's keen to see her. Now I"m curious about how she feels about him.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-49037373008213991702015-01-25T21:20:11.761-05:002015-01-25T21:20:11.761-05:00Just joined in on your snippets and I'm alread...Just joined in on your snippets and I'm already pulled in. Loved it. Can't wait to read more.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-56551563472951123132015-01-25T21:07:01.141-05:002015-01-25T21:07:01.141-05:00He called just at the wrong time, didn't he? O...He called just at the wrong time, didn't he? Or was that the right time? *laughs* Good dynamic between the two of them and relatable internal conflict.Aheilahttp://thewiteaholicblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-91676574915124181502015-01-25T20:15:15.096-05:002015-01-25T20:15:15.096-05:00"warm and rich" are the words that stand..."warm and rich" are the words that stand out to me, especially coming on the heels of the question posed in the first line of the snippet. Very nice.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-49970233262303334582015-01-25T20:00:17.229-05:002015-01-25T20:00:17.229-05:00Ok, so we have a big question mark about who or wh...Ok, so we have a big question mark about who or what Billy was. Another about whether she really loved him. And Jerry who is so in tune with her that he can tell how upset she is based on just a few words. I'm team Jerry at this point. Way to keep us hooked!Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-32331837940464269092015-01-25T17:03:33.358-05:002015-01-25T17:03:33.358-05:00Don't leave us hanging! I want to know what ha...Don't leave us hanging! I want to know what happens! :)<br /><br />Great 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03369135804368184168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-66593504115165144452015-01-25T16:39:33.750-05:002015-01-25T16:39:33.750-05:00I like Jerry but clearly we've got a very comp...I like Jerry but clearly we've got a very complicated situation going on here. I like how you're keeping all the suspense going and not making it simple. Great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-13181531318111028392015-01-25T15:46:26.896-05:002015-01-25T15:46:26.896-05:00I like how that he is willing to rush over at the ...I like how that he is willing to rush over at the drop of a hat.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-46307747752641263502015-01-25T13:22:01.649-05:002015-01-25T13:22:01.649-05:00Cliffhanger here and his name is Jerry. The plot t...Cliffhanger here and his name is Jerry. The plot thickens with who is in love with who and what the heck is going on. Love all the conflict, sadist that I am.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-16142950568064419582015-01-25T12:42:10.133-05:002015-01-25T12:42:10.133-05:00I liked her inner conflict at the start. Wonder ho...I liked her inner conflict at the start. Wonder how he'll react next. Good snippet! :)Lorien Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299242632625658988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-20998417702704191072015-01-25T12:24:40.587-05:002015-01-25T12:24:40.587-05:00Oh my, the tension jumps off the page. I wonder wh...Oh my, the tension jumps off the page. I wonder what will happen when he comes over. Fabulous 8.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-24348449838424696912015-01-25T11:01:29.698-05:002015-01-25T11:01:29.698-05:00Yes, get over there! Can't wait to see what h...Yes, get over there! Can't wait to see what happened. Love he eight!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90276899155125872312015-01-25T10:51:24.315-05:002015-01-25T10:51:24.315-05:00Love has to go both ways. Good snippet, Chelle. :)...Love has to go both ways. Good snippet, Chelle. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-88308551210994328222015-01-25T10:32:05.462-05:002015-01-25T10:32:05.462-05:00Oh boy...sounds like a lot of stress going on here...Oh boy...sounds like a lot of stress going on here. Makes me wonder why she married Billy if she doesn't really love him.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-52653021256324848052015-01-25T08:15:56.065-05:002015-01-25T08:15:56.065-05:00Is Jerry the hero or the obstacle? Either way, th...Is Jerry the hero or the obstacle? Either way, this should be a great read, Chelle. :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-86319971062455754722015-01-25T02:01:19.486-05:002015-01-25T02:01:19.486-05:00Ah, the "what ifs"... Well done.Ah, the "what ifs"... Well done. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-45509120547013583352015-01-24T23:31:35.131-05:002015-01-24T23:31:35.131-05:00"Would she have married Billy if she had know..."Would she have married Billy if she had known how Jerry felt?" <br />What a terrible thought to have, putting back everything she ever had in life because of someone else feeling. I wonder why she married Billy in the first place. Isn't it better to be alone than to be with someone you don't really wanna be with? Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-9261996608549544982015-01-24T22:06:14.348-05:002015-01-24T22:06:14.348-05:00What could cause her not to be fine?
Maybe next we...What could cause her not to be fine?<br />Maybe next week we get Jerry's reaction? <br />Nice 8!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.com