tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post1012125889569746701..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: She's worried ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 09/20/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-86149745548387271082015-09-25T15:59:11.177-04:002015-09-25T15:59:11.177-04:00And he doesn't even push to ask her what is wr...And he doesn't even push to ask her what is wrong. Hmm... He either trusts she will tell him in time why, or he already has a feeling he might know. I would have expected more questions from him. Except, I get the feeling trouble is ahead before those documents are completed, and I get the feeling that by saying that, she might be fearing for her life... Great snippet though!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-42698410162240632632015-09-25T12:06:45.945-04:002015-09-25T12:06:45.945-04:00Things ar totally going to get worth. That's s...Things ar totally going to get worth. That's so scary! Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-75742463489692595042015-09-22T22:47:24.043-04:002015-09-22T22:47:24.043-04:00Good stuff. Her worry and even a little bit of des...Good stuff. Her worry and even a little bit of desperation are all there and come through in both the prose and dialogue. The sense of relief at the end is palpable. JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-14102176294741093362015-09-21T00:50:12.189-04:002015-09-21T00:50:12.189-04:00I like that she's looking out for her son and ...I like that she's looking out for her son and he's more than willing to help her. Sounds like good father material!E.D. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06919218250424892502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-55977102015324574642015-09-21T00:16:41.607-04:002015-09-21T00:16:41.607-04:00She's finally trusting him a little. I hope it...She's finally trusting him a little. I hope it's not too late!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-65441615833313374362015-09-20T23:43:18.301-04:002015-09-20T23:43:18.301-04:00Can't wait for next weeks snippet. Loving Just...Can't wait for next weeks snippet. Loving Justin.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90621259875385896632015-09-20T22:38:20.813-04:002015-09-20T22:38:20.813-04:00I can relate to her fear in asking--good for her f...I can relate to her fear in asking--good for her for doing so! Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-91263460044544371772015-09-20T19:30:48.698-04:002015-09-20T19:30:48.698-04:00I'm liking Justin! I think he can protect the...I'm liking Justin! I think he can protect their son from her ex.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-16577974900071421592015-09-20T16:56:00.886-04:002015-09-20T16:56:00.886-04:00Justin is a great guy. I love his attitude, very ...Justin is a great guy. I love his attitude, very calm and willing. Love the scene, Great work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-12597457978282580002015-09-20T15:15:52.392-04:002015-09-20T15:15:52.392-04:00I like Justin and I'm glad she's trying to...I like Justin and I'm glad she's trying to get all the practical legal matters covered just in case. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-15480766725613893032015-09-20T15:04:41.992-04:002015-09-20T15:04:41.992-04:00I hope nothing happens, but so good that she's...I hope nothing happens, but so good that she's thinking of her son and his safety. I'm glad he's going to help out. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-8216556550695883352015-09-20T12:39:00.825-04:002015-09-20T12:39:00.825-04:00How perfect can you get? Just wonderful and you le...How perfect can you get? Just wonderful and you leave ua wondering about the lawyer. Will he be fast enough?Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-44928503116057958132015-09-20T11:31:58.750-04:002015-09-20T11:31:58.750-04:00At least the topic of conversation went smoothly. ...At least the topic of conversation went smoothly. Good flow of writing!Lorien Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299242632625658988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-68625799008316879392015-09-20T08:28:24.553-04:002015-09-20T08:28:24.553-04:00I would think that being his biological father wou...I would think that being his biological father would be enough, but better to be safe than sorry.Cara Bristolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13787980548582603649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-49140862197556601332015-09-20T07:05:46.728-04:002015-09-20T07:05:46.728-04:00So he is the child's father! Yes, I like this ...So he is the child's father! Yes, I like this Chelle, the way she's more concerned about her child than basking in the afterglow.<br />I also liked how you shared what Rosh Hoshana and Yom Kippur mean to you. Reflection and forgiveness are important tasks for all of us, and who knows, maybe our characters are the best parts of our very souls. Thanks for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615944959979986826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-45162231131792692312015-09-20T02:33:33.876-04:002015-09-20T02:33:33.876-04:00Hmmm...isn't his lawyer the one who didn't...Hmmm...isn't his lawyer the one who didn't want him to get involved in the first place?? Wow...all kinds of bad things could happen... Good 8, Chelle. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-31751443741060287282015-09-20T02:15:36.911-04:002015-09-20T02:15:36.911-04:00I have to wonder if "tomorrow" is going ...I have to wonder if "tomorrow" is going to be "soon enough."PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-14407359278071778892015-09-20T01:12:01.572-04:002015-09-20T01:12:01.572-04:00I like how you attend to the practical details, ra...I like how you attend to the practical details, rather than dealing in fairy tale romance.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-290312910867623822015-09-20T01:06:17.692-04:002015-09-20T01:06:17.692-04:00Good for her! If ever there was a good time to get...Good for her! If ever there was a good time to get help - this was it!Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.com