tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post2709600031980163152..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Lunch is ready ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 07/05/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-80940065551215732652015-07-07T00:55:23.826-04:002015-07-07T00:55:23.826-04:00Ooh, that one gave me the chills. He better not b...Ooh, that one gave me the chills. He better not be judging, it sounds like she's done well for herself. Very realistic, I love it. Sorry for the late comment. I'm just making my rounds now. I had my first homicide call over the weekend and it really shook me up. Ugh. :( Well now that it's over and done with, I'll be better prepared in the future.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-86797023428731177612015-07-05T20:19:18.001-04:002015-07-05T20:19:18.001-04:00I feel for both of them- what a tough situation. G...I feel for both of them- what a tough situation. Great snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-31663280816562243602015-07-05T18:25:37.288-04:002015-07-05T18:25:37.288-04:00I think they're coming together. They both wan...I think they're coming together. They both want the same thing, really. What's best for Dennis. This snippet is pretty clear on that. I understand her fears, though. I really do.<br /><br />Good snippet, Chelle!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90491822851545533722015-07-05T16:30:53.646-04:002015-07-05T16:30:53.646-04:00This guy's rich, if I remember correctly, so h...This guy's rich, if I remember correctly, so he probably won't merely accept poverty without either disapproval or a desire to fix things.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-33733529694694674002015-07-05T14:00:51.955-04:002015-07-05T14:00:51.955-04:00And hopefully they can bond a bit more over lunch....And hopefully they can bond a bit more over lunch. I really liked all the details you included in this excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-69883833415070947942015-07-05T13:19:15.286-04:002015-07-05T13:19:15.286-04:00Realistic and filled with tension! Great job!Realistic and filled with tension! Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-87140544084100792162015-07-05T13:17:27.338-04:002015-07-05T13:17:27.338-04:00Her concerns are realistic--luckily, we know he...Her concerns are realistic--luckily, we know he's okay! :)<br /><br />(his family, though . . . )Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-35759421389145726462015-07-05T10:23:25.058-04:002015-07-05T10:23:25.058-04:00You have a written a perfect description of her li...You have a written a perfect description of her life to this time. Well done, Chelle and now more to come.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-68718105711952571132015-07-05T02:54:38.923-04:002015-07-05T02:54:38.923-04:00Nicely done Chelle. The tension and unspoken thoug...Nicely done Chelle. The tension and unspoken thoughts promise to make things interesting.Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.com