tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post7234895208700927577..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Seize the opportunity - Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 05/31/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-57520228885867542622015-06-03T22:27:37.526-04:002015-06-03T22:27:37.526-04:00That last question is the biggie, isn't it? In...That last question is the biggie, isn't it? Intense stuff, Chelle.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-46660039699327024102015-06-02T13:17:00.230-04:002015-06-02T13:17:00.230-04:00They have both been dealt a lousy set of circumsta...They have both been dealt a lousy set of circumstances. He only just found out. She has demons that give her reason to be scared. More will be revealed next week. Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22897687393991635162015-06-01T21:07:40.574-04:002015-06-01T21:07:40.574-04:00I guess I can see why Layne is uncertain, but... ...I guess I can see why Layne is uncertain, but... unless Justin has suggested he wants to take the boy away, she's being excessively harsh. Does she want to deny her son the chance to know more about where he came from? Does it really hurt for them to talk?Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-79473531115933430742015-06-01T10:51:36.940-04:002015-06-01T10:51:36.940-04:00Ooh, that snippet describes a rough scenario. I u...Ooh, that snippet describes a rough scenario. I used to worry that my oldest's father would come back and try to take him from me, so for me the emotion in the scene is very relatable. Great work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-43049997039451519902015-06-01T00:18:05.905-04:002015-06-01T00:18:05.905-04:00I feel the same as Elaine. Great scene.I feel the same as Elaine. Great scene.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-58312923338474353892015-05-31T20:09:41.901-04:002015-05-31T20:09:41.901-04:00I feel her pain--and panic, but I can understand h...I feel her pain--and panic, but I can understand his concern, too. A good person takes responsibility for the lives they bring into this world, after all.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-90977402584770022052015-05-31T18:43:58.175-04:002015-05-31T18:43:58.175-04:00I think I'd worry about the same thing when th...I think I'd worry about the same thing when this stranger showed up.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-86944676880416487012015-05-31T16:43:20.795-04:002015-05-31T16:43:20.795-04:00Oh my. I think I see where she's coming from b...Oh my. I think I see where she's coming from but luckily he is very astute. He's nailed it on the head.Ashley Yorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174690230384292472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-18365447777643983122015-05-31T16:01:59.275-04:002015-05-31T16:01:59.275-04:00She does have a point, it seems; his involvement i...She does have a point, it seems; his involvement is minimal in the extreme. It makes me wonder what's going on inside of him that he acts this way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22451584999420712122015-05-31T14:40:45.947-04:002015-05-31T14:40:45.947-04:00At least they're talking! A lot more to say of...At least they're talking! A lot more to say of course. Very intriguing story, another effective excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-21002891721721934152015-05-31T12:51:03.573-04:002015-05-31T12:51:03.573-04:00What an awkward way to meet for both of them. I ca...What an awkward way to meet for both of them. I can see why she would feel threatened by him showing up out of the blue. I curious how he'll handle all this. I hoping for a good outcome for all of them.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-44897072879122873732015-05-31T12:00:07.143-04:002015-05-31T12:00:07.143-04:00Wow, how emotionally charged! Let's see what h...Wow, how emotionally charged! Let's see what happens next and what everyone is really after!Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-11286441298775113382015-05-31T11:48:42.795-04:002015-05-31T11:48:42.795-04:00Is he entitled or not? They'll work it out. Yo...Is he entitled or not? They'll work it out. Your story is fascinating and different. Maybe the boy will have the answer. Suspense.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-71662077922176221972015-05-31T10:44:54.276-04:002015-05-31T10:44:54.276-04:00This just gets more and more interesting, Chelle!
...This just gets more and more interesting, Chelle!<br /><br />I can't wait to see where this goes next... :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-25275842750313259202015-05-31T09:06:50.436-04:002015-05-31T09:06:50.436-04:00Great dialogue exchange. I think Justin has a righ...Great dialogue exchange. I think Justin has a right to his son even if he was a sperm donor. Layne should be more considerate.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-16544986570389419752015-05-31T03:05:26.424-04:002015-05-31T03:05:26.424-04:00The plot thickens. She is totally right, he needs ...The plot thickens. She is totally right, he needs an ass kick and to get out of here even if he didn't want to come in the first place. Especially because he didn't want to come in the first place. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-89931274754428556182015-05-31T02:49:35.086-04:002015-05-31T02:49:35.086-04:00Wonderful, emotional exchange, Chelle. The dialogu...Wonderful, emotional exchange, Chelle. The dialogue is very natural and very real. I love her retort that he jerked off in a cup and that's his involvement. Nicely done!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-7414988453297535022015-05-31T02:27:46.185-04:002015-05-31T02:27:46.185-04:00Love the emotion in this snippet, especially the &...Love the emotion in this snippet, especially the "he's my son, not yours."<br /><br />As far as she's concerned, they were just fine without him, so if he isn't trying to take him away from her then why is he there? I can't wait to hear the answer...<br />P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-33589718216266806992015-05-31T01:49:28.581-04:002015-05-31T01:49:28.581-04:00such a difficult situation for both of them. I can...such a difficult situation for both of them. I can understand both their point of views. Great snippet!Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.com