tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post7352720864646100850..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: 10/27/13 WEWRIWA a community of writers and readersChelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-25185569129254622552013-10-29T13:06:41.854-04:002013-10-29T13:06:41.854-04:00Oh that's an interesting twist--he can see her...Oh that's an interesting twist--he can see her! I wonder what that means. They must be linked together somehow? Very good 8! I'm enjoying your story.HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-22385044064919372122013-10-28T03:47:36.430-04:002013-10-28T03:47:36.430-04:00Hi Sarah & Michelle, Yes this scene is quite t...Hi Sarah & Michelle, Yes this scene is quite the turning point in the story.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1444158418358323142013-10-27T19:56:32.542-04:002013-10-27T19:56:32.542-04:00here's the big reveal. now its going to start ...here's the big reveal. now its going to start clickingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13164269285285491186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-64307399002389973482013-10-27T19:55:19.220-04:002013-10-27T19:55:19.220-04:00Oh, wow...he can see her! There must be a reason ...Oh, wow...he can see her! There must be a reason for it. I can't wait to see more.Sarah Casshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03299866797067130767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-72587680675898192262013-10-27T17:14:02.139-04:002013-10-27T17:14:02.139-04:00Emma, remember my snippet last week http://bit.ly/...Emma, remember my snippet last week http://bit.ly/1em6nE2 when Dave saw a mysterious woman that no one else saw? Could this be her?<br />Linda, you might be asking about the wrong person...<br />Charmaine, Millie and Veronica, so glad that you are enjoying this story.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-76765563680039993852013-10-27T17:14:01.683-04:002013-10-27T17:14:01.683-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-60162516323850656542013-10-27T16:11:21.762-04:002013-10-27T16:11:21.762-04:00LOVE this story, so cool. Today's excerpt was ...LOVE this story, so cool. Today's excerpt was excellent!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-29056122079116116942013-10-27T15:02:25.230-04:002013-10-27T15:02:25.230-04:00Wow, this leads to lots of questions!Wow, this leads to lots of questions!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-38818494542545147302013-10-27T12:42:45.911-04:002013-10-27T12:42:45.911-04:00hum, maybe he also needs some help. hum, maybe he also needs some help. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-42581063861498507532013-10-27T11:04:58.051-04:002013-10-27T11:04:58.051-04:00Very intriguing, I want to know where he's see...Very intriguing, I want to know where he's seen her before and why she's denying it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10119964940961161125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-67320183141641765462013-10-27T09:57:07.706-04:002013-10-27T09:57:07.706-04:00Ah, the first moment of recognition and what a bea...Ah, the first moment of recognition and what a beauty. More. I want more.Tantalizing eight. Thanks, Chelle.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com