tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post7901669442937110331..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Danger ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 02/15/15Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-10864516618344976352015-02-15T23:52:10.884-05:002015-02-15T23:52:10.884-05:00Smell is such a strong sense to link events to-- s...Smell is such a strong sense to link events to-- starting the snippet off with such a vivid description of it changes the way the whole scene is read. Good stuff.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-56895734711710263722015-02-15T19:06:25.973-05:002015-02-15T19:06:25.973-05:00Tense indeed and I'm guessing more twists and ...Tense indeed and I'm guessing more twists and turns to come in this story. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-71472149201786346872015-02-15T16:42:44.239-05:002015-02-15T16:42:44.239-05:00Intriguing snippet, Chelle. Scary place to be. Intriguing snippet, Chelle. Scary place to be. Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-37115571486093244872015-02-15T16:33:36.286-05:002015-02-15T16:33:36.286-05:00Excellent description that really puts the reader ...Excellent description that really puts the reader in the scene. I'm wondering, though, how changing into jeans made the pseudo rescuer look more dangerous. I'd be interested to know more about that transformation.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-50441271631239672662015-02-15T16:17:08.409-05:002015-02-15T16:17:08.409-05:00Amazing description. Definitely grabs the reader&#...Amazing description. Definitely grabs the reader's full attention.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-39879603754860269892015-02-15T15:50:34.418-05:002015-02-15T15:50:34.418-05:00Great dramatic teaser excerpt! I could see where s...Great dramatic teaser excerpt! I could see where she was clearly.Ella M. Kayehttp://ellamkaye.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-25825864186289868892015-02-15T15:42:50.860-05:002015-02-15T15:42:50.860-05:00Oooh, I could smell that handkerchief.... Intense...Oooh, I could smell that handkerchief.... Intense!!!! Great eight!Nevahttp://www.nevasquiresrodriguez.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-91057744125900388142015-02-15T14:53:33.368-05:002015-02-15T14:53:33.368-05:00All the senses are nicely involved here. Too bad h...All the senses are nicely involved here. Too bad her surroundings and companions don't seem so nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-33085517640119483532015-02-15T14:45:00.858-05:002015-02-15T14:45:00.858-05:00Wow, what a vivid description. Just reading it mad...Wow, what a vivid description. Just reading it made me feel anxious! Great snippet!Christina Ochshttp://christinaochs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-62614111203176084372015-02-15T12:36:38.679-05:002015-02-15T12:36:38.679-05:00I was in the room with her. I could feel the draft...I was in the room with her. I could feel the draft from the floor. I could see the man. Great 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03369135804368184168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-70598834310280401502015-02-15T12:13:30.878-05:002015-02-15T12:13:30.878-05:00I read and reread this book, frightened from the b...I read and reread this book, frightened from the beginning and then the wonderful details that enriched the story. Thanks, Chelle.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-51591009902219388192015-02-15T11:33:04.388-05:002015-02-15T11:33:04.388-05:00Great snippet, so much detail I felt like I was in...Great snippet, so much detail I felt like I was in the room with her. Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-86466635672115873342015-02-15T10:37:50.846-05:002015-02-15T10:37:50.846-05:00Great description. I could feel her discomfort and...Great description. I could feel her discomfort and fear.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-48588783096482786812015-02-15T10:26:13.683-05:002015-02-15T10:26:13.683-05:00This guy looks super scary, especially because he ...This guy looks super scary, especially because he wasn't afraid of being in the front line and be seen. I wouldn't like to be in her shoes. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-81089424918668954452015-02-15T07:58:25.738-05:002015-02-15T07:58:25.738-05:00Vivid descriptions! My heart's in my throat fo...Vivid descriptions! My heart's in my throat for her. Great excerpt. Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-88758785854098382152015-02-15T07:52:54.939-05:002015-02-15T07:52:54.939-05:00Yeah, I guess he would look dangerous! He kidnappe...Yeah, I guess he would look dangerous! He kidnapped her and tied her up.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-32775918022107609422015-02-15T02:42:49.248-05:002015-02-15T02:42:49.248-05:00Wonderful imagery! And I'm intrigued about Mr....Wonderful imagery! And I'm intrigued about Mr. T-shirt and jeans.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-57450326028676535942015-02-15T01:40:04.159-05:002015-02-15T01:40:04.159-05:00I hope her pseudo rescuer's not quite as dange...I hope her pseudo rescuer's not quite as dangerous as he seems! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-5629555847960288792015-02-15T01:08:06.297-05:002015-02-15T01:08:06.297-05:00I love the detail about the floor being dusty and ...I love the detail about the floor being dusty and drafty. And I can't wait to find out more about the man. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-7023532505101304052015-02-14T23:55:31.392-05:002015-02-14T23:55:31.392-05:00Very descriptive, I can't wait to find out mor...Very descriptive, I can't wait to find out more about the "pseudo rescuer". Enjoying this story.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-1338355287458700502015-02-14T22:41:01.277-05:002015-02-14T22:41:01.277-05:00Wonderfully descriptive, Chelle. It was so easy to...Wonderfully descriptive, Chelle. It was so easy to put myself in her shoes...and that's a pretty worrisome place to be. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-10758246239468058632015-02-14T20:01:26.743-05:002015-02-14T20:01:26.743-05:00Very tense, Chelle!
I'm intrigued by that han...Very tense, Chelle!<br /><br />I'm intrigued by that handsome, mysterious bank robber . . . :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-13040758019073357652015-02-14T18:43:10.024-05:002015-02-14T18:43:10.024-05:00Very well described. So well, in fact, I squirmed ...Very well described. So well, in fact, I squirmed in my chair and thought, I never want to be tied up and helpless like that. Great snippet!Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.com