tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post8450438301926192944..comments2023-11-25T19:55:38.162-05:00Comments on <b>Chelle Cordero, Author</b>: Just a joke? ~ Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 06/19/16Chelle Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-3909009144084498132016-06-21T22:12:31.694-04:002016-06-21T22:12:31.694-04:00Poor Dave! I'm betting that he's thinking ...Poor Dave! I'm betting that he's thinking that he needs a loooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggg vacation!P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-80332381337404752722016-06-21T16:41:14.448-04:002016-06-21T16:41:14.448-04:00This is really messing with my head, so I can only...This is really messing with my head, so I can only imagine how poor Dave feels! ;-)<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-68217030355055871222016-06-21T12:52:47.172-04:002016-06-21T12:52:47.172-04:00I love how mysterious this is! Is she really dream...I love how mysterious this is! Is she really dreaming in bed and did she travel somewhere in her dreams or is that dude seeing things?? Great snippet.Rachel Barnardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03953219268087089312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-75509637589784874402016-06-20T12:35:23.665-04:002016-06-20T12:35:23.665-04:00Wow, I love where this is going. I can't wait ...Wow, I love where this is going. I can't wait to see what happens next.Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-71134804932799988002016-06-20T09:22:11.669-04:002016-06-20T09:22:11.669-04:00I can't wait to see the look on his face after...I can't wait to see the look on his face after that exit. :) :) Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04950660535423771434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-87367481981924747962016-06-19T20:46:01.874-04:002016-06-19T20:46:01.874-04:00Poor David. I'm sure he's freaked out.Poor David. I'm sure he's freaked out.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-73550483731240840782016-06-19T19:58:41.527-04:002016-06-19T19:58:41.527-04:00I can see why he wants to believe this is an elabo...I can see why he wants to believe this is an elaborate joke... but really, in those circumstances, the police/medics would not be joking around. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-70999638702533249652016-06-19T13:32:39.344-04:002016-06-19T13:32:39.344-04:00This is SUCH a cool story! I love that he can see ...This is SUCH a cool story! I love that he can see her...can't wait for more, great snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-6580878748415793792016-06-19T12:14:30.228-04:002016-06-19T12:14:30.228-04:00What a stunner! She'll be upset too.What a stunner! She'll be upset too.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-4805925910996689892016-06-19T11:17:37.063-04:002016-06-19T11:17:37.063-04:00Well if that doesn't blow his mind, I don'...Well if that doesn't blow his mind, I don't know what will!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-80361168383282639992016-06-19T10:04:21.058-04:002016-06-19T10:04:21.058-04:00LOL I agree with Ed! Good scene though, I think bo...LOL I agree with Ed! Good scene though, I think both characters are going to be a little mixed up. Good for the story!Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-8408652226983185902016-06-19T09:59:44.637-04:002016-06-19T09:59:44.637-04:00Wow. Really good. Excellent choice of a snippet.Wow. Really good. Excellent choice of a snippet.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-59263183649864097842016-06-19T09:21:35.249-04:002016-06-19T09:21:35.249-04:00Excellent story premise!Excellent story premise!HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-49156968628187085932016-06-19T07:56:46.710-04:002016-06-19T07:56:46.710-04:00I love the dialogue! It makes me want to read more...I love the dialogue! It makes me want to read more - what's his reaction going to be? Great snippet!Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-81987618225838470442016-06-19T05:21:32.021-04:002016-06-19T05:21:32.021-04:00What a great dialogue ... I love her answers ... s...What a great dialogue ... I love her answers ... so true, but so unreal. Great snippet!Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9126016220287748031.post-15917221954122396422016-06-19T01:32:26.207-04:002016-06-19T01:32:26.207-04:00I'm hoping the next snippet isn't at a men...I'm hoping the next snippet isn't at a mental hospital, with the hero checking himself in.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com