As Dave watched the fire department volunteers that were left to bring the bodies up to the roadway, he realized he hadn't seen all of them come up the embankment. There had been a woman next to the car, he noticed her because she wasn't in uniform like the others. Who was she, he asked one of the firefighters about her.
The guy shrugged, “Who?” He was busy helping the tow truck operator unwind the winch to haul the car back up.
“There was another woman down there, next to the car, where is she?” he looked around. “I wanted to ask her if she saw the accident, she wasn't in uniform.”
The firefighter frowned, “Sorry, never saw her.”
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Annie Furman has a gift that allows her, while she sleeps, to visit people in their time of need - but who will be there for her when she needs help? Undersheriff Dave Turner is investigating a series of home invasions and homicides. He has no idea that solving this case will lead him to the woman of his dreams.
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12 comments:
Who is she? Ghost or shy heroic citizen?
Intriguing! Good snippet this week.
Spooky...the woman who wasn't really there...
Oh how interesting, he's the only one who saw her. Great story line possibilities her. I'm enjoying your story. Nice to have another mystery writer on the list!
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You drew me right into this scene watching along with the sheriff. Good eight!
Great use of the 8's, Chelle. Well done!
A very intriguing 8. Compels you to want to read on...
Ooh, that gave me chills! This is such an intriguing story...excellent excerpt, can't wait for more.
Give's me chills. I like that. Great 8.
Annie travels in her dreams so she is physically not there but her "spirit" is.
Of course the question here is HOW and WHY the sheriff sees her.
Thanks for your comments. I am working on a sequel so this is really helpful.
He's the only one who saw her dream projection? Interesting... Now he just has to find her awake.
Oooh, so he noticed her. I wonder how he'll find her again, and how she'll explain. Can't wait for more!
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