Saturday, October 19, 2013

10/20/13 WEWRIWA a community of writers and readers


Once again, another snippet from Karma Visited. In this scene, Undersheriff Dave Turner has been called to the scene of a motor vehicle accident. The survivors, two children, have already been rescued. (creative punctuation has been employed)

As Dave watched the fire department volunteers that were left to bring the bodies up to the roadway, he realized he hadn't seen all of them come up the embankment. There had been a woman next to the car, he noticed her because she wasn't in uniform like the others. Who was she, he asked one of the firefighters about her. 
The guy shrugged, “Who?” He was busy helping the tow truck operator unwind the winch to haul the car back up. 
“There was another woman down there, next to the car, where is she?” he looked around. “I wanted to ask her if she saw the accident, she wasn't in uniform.” 
The firefighter frowned, “Sorry, never saw her.” 
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Do you believe in karma? 
Annie Furman has a gift that allows her, while she sleeps, to visit people in their time of need - but who will be there for her when she needs help? Undersheriff Dave Turner is investigating a series of home invasions and homicides. He has no idea that solving this case will lead him to the woman of his dreams. 

Karma Visited will stay with you 
I simply could not put this book down! A must-read! The story will haunt you. This is a story where you really root for the good guys and boo the bad guys! I loved it!
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12 comments:

Millie Burns said...

Who is she? Ghost or shy heroic citizen?

Heather Boyd said...

Intriguing! Good snippet this week.

Cara Bristol said...

Spooky...the woman who wasn't really there...

Cindy Amrhein said...

Oh how interesting, he's the only one who saw her. Great story line possibilities her. I'm enjoying your story. Nice to have another mystery writer on the list!
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Charmaine Gordon said...

You drew me right into this scene watching along with the sheriff. Good eight!

J. A. Hornbuckle said...

Great use of the 8's, Chelle. Well done!

Emma Jean Hoffmann said...

A very intriguing 8. Compels you to want to read on...

Veronica Scott said...

Ooh, that gave me chills! This is such an intriguing story...excellent excerpt, can't wait for more.

authorannelange.com said...

Give's me chills. I like that. Great 8.

Chelle Cordero said...

Annie travels in her dreams so she is physically not there but her "spirit" is.

Of course the question here is HOW and WHY the sheriff sees her.

Thanks for your comments. I am working on a sequel so this is really helpful.

caitlinsternwrites said...

He's the only one who saw her dream projection? Interesting... Now he just has to find her awake.

Sarah Cass said...

Oooh, so he noticed her. I wonder how he'll find her again, and how she'll explain. Can't wait for more!