Hi! Welcome to another Weekend Writing Warrior round. Every week writers post 8 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we "hop" around and leave comments on each other's snippets. Whether our work is already published or in progress, the helpful comments help us become stronger writers on our next WIP. We welcome EVERYONE's comments.
Following right after last week's snippet, Justin joins Lane in her apartment for the proffered soup. Aware that Justin comes from money makes Layne nervous about his approval.
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Years ago, Layne had learned to stretch a dollar by making leftover meat and vegetables into stew and then into a watered down soup; she did her best to provide the best she could for her young son. She felt guilty for denying him a father, she didn't want to have to deny him anything else either. Layne arranged everything on a tray and carried it to the small folding table she had set for the two of them in the living room.
Justin was in the living room, he offered to help but when she told him it was no bother, he used the time to look at the modest furnishings. The clay pot on the coffee table looked like Dennis might have made it in school and his mother proudly displayed it for all to see just as if it were some expensive Ming-Dynasty vase. It obviously hadn't been easy for them financially.
Layne was worried that he would judge their meager set-up harshly, she worried that he would want to take Dennis away from her; he could afford to give their son so many luxuries.
"Lunch is served, I'm sorry, I'm sure you're used to much better."
"It smells great, thanks for inviting me..."
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The two parents realize they can love each other, but when Layne’s abusive “ex-husband” shows up, they are torn apart by danger, kidnapping and lies. Justin won’t give up until Layne is returned to him. Layne uses her newfound strength, courage and knowledge to defy Charlie’s ugliest demands.
It's July 4th weekend here in America!
"Independence Day of the United States, also referred to as Fourth of July or July 4th in the USA, is a federal holiday commemorating the adoption of the Declaration of Independence on July 4, 1776..." (from Wikipedia)
Happy Birthday America!
I hope you'll join me for a virtual barbecue & festivities!