Hi! Welcome to another Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday round. Every week writers post 8-to-10 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we "hop" around and leave comments on each other's snippets. Whether our work is already published or in progress, the helpful comments help us become stronger writers on our next WIP. We welcome EVERYONE's comments.
A long, long time ago I shared a few snippets from my Paranormal Romantic Suspense, Karma Visited (only 5) - and we didn't get a full taste of this . Since I am working on a sequel and revisiting the story for myself, I'm sharing more with you and soaking up your comments.
Do you believe in karma? Annie Furman has a gift that allows her, while she sleeps, to visit people in their time of need - but who will be there for her when she needs help? Undersheriff Dave Turner is investigating a series of home invasions and homicides. He has no idea that solving this case will lead him to the woman of his dreams.
Annie visits Dave in another dream and they share an ALMOST NORMAL and comfortable conversation. Dave admits he is... confused by what is happening.
Creative editing alert! Here are Nine lines...
“Normally the only people that can see me are in trouble, maybe I’m there to comfort them so they don’t die alone.”
“That kidnapped girl didn’t die thanks to you.”
“You were already there.”
“We didn’t know where she was,” he leaned towards her, “it was you at that accident, wasn’t it?”
She looked away thinking of the children in the car.
“You made that phone call, how did you do that?”
“I woke up and called the police.”
“And then you came back to the scene,” Dave laughed, “if someone else was telling me that this was happening to him I would think he was crazy.”
She bit her lip, “there are people who think that I am crazy when I try to tell them what I’ve seen.”
“The idea freaks me out, just do me a favor and assure me that this is real, I mean as real as it can be,” he paused, “it is a hard concept to swallow.”
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