Hi! Welcome to another Weekend Writing Warrior round. Every week writers post 8 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we "hop" around and leave comments on each other's snippets. Whether our work is already published or in progress, the helpful comments help us become stronger writers on our next WIP. We welcome EVERYONE's comments.
Justin was feeling totally frustrated because of Layne's reaction to his announcement and he went back to his motel room to brood and hopefully give her some time to cool down. He wasn't a man who was used to being told no and right now all he was thinking about was how this situation complicated his life. (Don't worry, he may be spoiled, but he really isn't as heartless as he thinks he is...) This snippet has been edited to fit, even though we're permitted up to 10 I am still aiming for 8 so I don't feel guilty when I go over.
...and now the
"Damn it,"
Justin paced the short length of his motel room; this little nothing town was
one of the last places he wanted to be. Damn Davis for insisting that he had to
"get this matter cleared up", damn his brother for leaving him the
only heir, and damn his grandfather for dying and dumping everything on his
shoulders.
After a rocky start Justin
had been a model student for years until he earned his master's degree, he
drank only moderately and partied occasionally. There had been a few college
girls he saw on a serious level, but he never got carried away; he never made
promises and he never once thought of a future with any of them. That was why
he was so surprised when the family attorney, Larry Davis, told him he was a
father.
"That's
impossible," Justin protested, "I was always very careful. If some
girl told you it's mine, don't believe it." He had always been a careful
and considerate lover and when it came time to end a relationship, he always
did it gently. He'd bet his life he never got any girl pregnant.
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Layne Gillette’s world is turned upside down when a man she has never met shows up to lay claim as the father of her 6-year old son.
Justin, the victim of a fraternity prank, and Layne, the subject of a forced insemination, have produced a beautiful child that they are both willing to protect… at all costs.
The two parents realize they can love each other, but when Layne’s abusive “ex-husband” shows up, they are torn apart by danger, kidnapping and lies. Justin won’t give up until Layne is returned to him. Layne uses her newfound strength, courage and knowledge to defy Charlie’s ugliest demands.
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