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This week we continue with Courage of the Heart, from my Survivor Series.
Last week Adam angrily rejected Davie during lovemaking when he learns she is a virgin:
Last week Adam angrily rejected Davie during lovemaking when he learns she is a virgin:
She
watched incredulously as he pulled a pair of jeans on, "I'm sorry," suddenly Davie
felt angry, "If you thought that I thought it was going to be some kind
of commitment you don't need to worry, I got carried away… don't worry, it
won't happen again." She stood taking the bed-sheet with her to cover
herself, "If you don't mind giving me some privacy, I'll get
dressed."
Her
anger made him feel contrite and he responded in much gentler tones, "I'll
take you home as soon as you're ready."
"Don't
bother, I'll manage on my own," She stared at the bedroom door pointedly,
but he didn't budge. "Fine," Davie
dropped the linen to the floor and picked up her clothing.
Earlier,
Adam's body had felt as cold as if he had been blasted with icy water, but as
he got another glimpse of her astonishingly beautiful naked body again, he was
happy he had donned his pants to hide his reaction.
"I… I'm
sorry", he turned his back to her, "I… I just can't be… the
first."
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COURAGE OF THE HEART shows us that sometimes love is the only cure for the very deepest of emotional wounds. The story of the two lovers takes a series of unexpected and fast paced turns where lives, sanity and love are put in jeopardy. Their commitment to one another results in a spirit that binds them together and helps them to overcome physical and emotional dangers.
from Amazon
By Gloria Antypowich
Adam Sherman is a computer expert and a womanizer who is dedicated to "Bedding but not Wedding." When he becomes aware of Davie Prescott, a twenty year old student who works part time at the same place that he does, he pursues her.
10 comments:
You captured the awkward moment so well. Great 8
Good that you explained his actions, Chelle. So he doesn't want to be first. Wow! Foolish man. What happens next?
Interesting scene. I agree with Heather, you captured all the awkwardness very well. Excellent excerpt!
He is a strange one...if he's interested in her, if he cares for her, why wouldn't he want to be her first? This has me wondering about him.
Hi all, Davie also wonders why he isn't willing to sleep with a virgin...
Very interested to see where this is going. There's got to be a reason for his reluctance. Great eight!
Wow that was hard, for both of them. I can understand her anger.
So, she should go out and find someone else and then come back?
That's not the textbook way of running a relationship . . . he'd better have one heck of a secret!
Oh, the real reason he pulled on his pants. Surprised me there. Nice excerpt!
Roberta
Adam doesn't seem to be too happy with his reluctance either.
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