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Welcome to a snippet from Courage of the Heart. Courage of the Heart was originally published by Xlibris in 1999 (BEFORE they went full vanity press) - with no real marketing efforts from the publisher and before I knew much about the subject, it didn't do very well. However it was revised slightly and republished by Vanilla Heart Publishing in 2009 and has enjoyed a healthier reception.
Feeling rejected by Adam - again - Davie takes a bus to visit her father in time for the anniversary of her mother's passing. It's always been her habit to be with him to remember her mom together, but since she was busy the night before taking care of the very sick Adam she never got around to calling her dad about her visit. Spurned by one of the men in her life, she was ready to be comforted by her father. Imagine her surprise when she walks in on him and his special lady-friend. (btw, "Gizzy" is her childhood dog that still lives at home.)
Feeling rejected by Adam - again - Davie takes a bus to visit her father in time for the anniversary of her mother's passing. It's always been her habit to be with him to remember her mom together, but since she was busy the night before taking care of the very sick Adam she never got around to calling her dad about her visit. Spurned by one of the men in her life, she was ready to be comforted by her father. Imagine her surprise when she walks in on him and his special lady-friend. (btw, "Gizzy" is her childhood dog that still lives at home.)
Davie stared out the bedroom window into the dark night, she couldn’t
sleep; there were so many things running through her mind. Gizzy was snoring as
he lay at her feet. She was still upset that Adam had forced her to leave and
she was confused to find that her father was moving on with his life without
her mother and without Davie’s blessing if need be.
She had been surprised to see her father's tears at the cemetery; her
father's grieving over the loss of her mother comforted Davie, at the same time
she felt terrible seeing his pain. They had gone to church together and she sat
with his arm around her shoulders, it was good to be with him and just him.
Davie was grateful that Elizabeth understood that she would only be intruding.
On the drive home from the church, he told her that they would be
having dinner with Elizabeth and that's when the fighting started.
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