Hi! Welcome to another Weekend Writing Warrior round. Every week writers post 8 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we "hop" around and leave comments on each other's snippets. Whether our work is already published or in progress, the helpful comments help us become stronger writers on our next WIP. We welcome EVERYONE's comments.
The kidnapper seems more concerned with Deanna's welfare than one would expect.
...and now the eight:
“Just let me go,” she pleaded, “I swear I’ll forget what you look like.”
“Right,” he snorted, “you wouldn’t be in this mess if you were that kind of person. Do you have family?”
“No one has any money to pay a ransom if that’s what you want to know.”
He frowned, “I wasn’t suggesting ransom, I simply wanted to know if anyone was worried whether you were alive or dead. I’ll let them know you’re alright.”
He walked to the door, “I wouldn’t waste your time or energy screaming, this place is pretty isolated in the off season and the only ones who would hear you are my crew and trust me you don’t want their attention.” He sounded apologetic, “if you cooperate, we won’t hurt you.”
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Hostage Heart by Chelle Cordero is available as an AUDIOBOOK and in All Ebook Formats and Print Editions.
Life was hard after the hurricanes swept through, destroying her parents' home and livelihood...Deanna did the only thing she could do. She moved to New York City, found a job, worked hard, scrimped and saved to send what little she could manage back home to Louisiana to her parents.
An errand for her boss - a chance encounter with a crew of bank robbers - a kind man who tried to help her and deserved her courageous help in return... But he wasn't the man she thought he was...no, he was so very much more!
Hostage Heart is a captivating read… I really enjoyed Chelle Cordero's 'Hostage Heart. It read quickly and kept my interest until the very end. I would highly recommend this book and I plan to read all of the author's other books. It took me along on the adventure. I enjoyed the romance.
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